teremaki's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chastity's Belt]

A nice erotic version of the Mastermind game.
The clicking and dragging becomes a little tiring after some time, you should incorporate the number and arrow keys to make it easier.
Sometimes you don't place a key exactly on a lock and it unlocks the adjacent one.
The medals are a good touch but i doubt I'll get any of them playing with a mouse.

Good job , but you could add more animation and modes and make it even better.
Where can I find the adult version of this?

[Effing Worms - Xmas]

Merry Effing Xmas indeed! This really gets your adrenaline flowing.
The gameplay was similar to the previous versions - no need for commenting on that.
I liked the intro and the Santa munching part as well.

I only wish the campaign was longer, with as many as 20 different upgrades to choose from.
But i guess you'll take care of it in your next game.

The medals work fine, i got all of them.
Waiting eagerly for the sequel... Merry Christmas !

[King Dugan's Dungeon ep.2]

I can't believe this is finally here!
I've been waiting for this for a long time, and you didn't disappoint.
Incredibly challenging and tons of medals.

In the first episode, a few of the medals didn't register for me until you uploaded the file again.
So far everything seems to be working properly. I'll play to the very end and PM you my findings.

[Tincan 2]

Not bad at all.
I liked the little animations and the music was good too.
It's not very frustrating but it just seems like a waste of time to play to the end.
What you really need are medals. That's what the IWBTG like games on Newgrounds use, and you're motivated to try again.

Good game, but like I said - needs medals. :-)

BretHudson responds:

I'll have to check out the metals API. :) Thanks for the suggestion, I'll definitely add them!

[Sandile's Who's That? 2]

Not quite epic.
What I hate the most about this game is manually selecting the text box, erasing "Wrong", typing in the name and clicking on "Enter". This has to be one of the most irritating aspects in a game I have ever seen.
The game itself is quite challenging, I enjoyed that.
I could only play till level 28 after which the images were beyond recognition.
This needs more points per medal, because of the difficulty.

Your sponsor is right, the spellings are hard to remember and because of the irritating mechanic I mentioned above, some people may never get the answer right (remember Genosect from your first game).
Once these changes are implemented, this would be a fun game.
Best of luck!

[Robot Adventure 2]

Not a bad game, but I've certainly seen better games in this style.
I think the coding is to blame here, it doesn't cover many of the possibilities of user interaction.
Also I think you skipped the testing phase during game development.
The music was alright - classic 8 bit style.
It was somewhat challenging , not too much.
You included medals, those were essential.

Now for the improvements-
The hitboxes really need to be calibrated especially with the crushing pistons.
The animation was really simple, you should make more vibrant animations.
The disappearing traps, as everyone pointed out already.
Shockingly, i clicked on the little space ship in the level select menu after completing 3 levels and it took me to the final battle.

This is an average platformer that could have been made a lot better with careful coding and testing. I hope the next version is better.
Best of luck!

lartar responds:

Hi,

Thank you so much for your feedback. After the numer of plays and the feedback, we will make a new version of the game. This game was made long time ago, and was not released for some issues with the sponsor.

We will improve it and take your feedback to make a better game.

Thanks for taking the time to let us know.

[Sandile's Who's That?]

A good sequel although the first one was way better.
Try tweaking the following:
The Lucario image flashes a black strip at the bottom.
Giratina was almost out of the screen.
The textbox reads "Wrong" even though my answer is right.
How do you get the Gallade medal? I played through thrice and it doesn't appear.

Anyways thanks for the free medals and annoyingly sweet music.
Add a lot more pokemon next time... and MEDALS!
Good job, bro.

[Hood Episode 4]

Great game, Hyptosis!
I've enjoyed playing all your games and am truly sad that this is the final episode of this series.
First Alice is Dead and now this... no worries, I've still got The Sagittarian to look out for.

As for this game, you've really put a lot of work into the dialogues and the artwork.
I liked the way you masked the puzzles. They looked really cryptic but were actually incredibly simple.
The Sun to Soil puzzle was a little unfair (most people wouldn't think of clicking the last thing at the end) , but the next door puzzle is so much fun that it balances it out.
And thanks for the medals as usual, I'll play the game a few times over to get them all.

I hope there is a new series in the making and a lot more point and click games to come soon.
Cheers!

Hyptosis responds:

Thanks for the kind words of support. Stay cool man!

[Infinite Loop]

Great concept.
The game was pretty bare though with minimal controls.
The "yay" sound gets really annoying after a while.
Being an engineer, I took hardly two minutes to solve the levels.
When you develop on this game, make it more presentable and add the remaining concept of EX-OR
Good game . Cheers!