teremaki's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[RAPTUS]

Very touching and wonderfully made with great music.
The slow gameplay definitely adds to the effect you wanted to create.
The only minor complaint i have is with the exact point for clicking at the Push Him part.
It took me almost 4 minutes to figure it out.

Also could you upload the original version somewhere? I would love to see what "mature content" i missed out even if it is just a few seconds worth.

AlanZucconi responds:

Thank you for your feedback! :-)
When I said "original version" I referred mainly to the original project I had on my mind.
In my initial idea you would actually see the scene. It starts hitting Her as a mistake, then He would find himself incapable of anything else but keeping hitting here till death.
The initial version I designed had some "mature" content in the sense that the dialogue was much more explicit. She was saying "Not so fast... go slower..." and then the "evil light" appeared on top of his with "faster... faster... make her suffer... she deserve it". It was mush more violent on a psychological level, but in the end I decided to let the player to fill the gaps in the scene.
Unfortunately nope, there are no previous versions! :'(

[Funsome]

Pretty good.
Frustrating at some points but the sense of accomplishment after that made it worth it.
Next time use more games and make it less challenging.

coffingames responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I will try to keep it more easy next time.

[Anaksha Mini Adventures 2]

First of all, thank you for such an amazing game, Arif.
And thanks for not stereotyping us indians (forgive my username).

The highlights:
- I loved the gameplay. It was like playing Leisure Suit Larry but without the cheap humour.
- The chemistry between Anaksha and Creepy Guy.
- The story was pretty good.
- The little faces with various emotions at the bottom left in dialogues added spice to them.
- The music was just right for each location.
- The sexual innuendo was bang on. Not too little, not over the top.
- So were the puzzles. Not too easy, not too hard.

Now, for the stuff you could change:
The display time of "This item cannot be used here" and "These do not combine" can be reduced.
An option to change the walking speed whenever we want.
The medals don't seem to work.

Anyways, that's nothing compared to the highlights. So, you get your 5/5 and 10/10.
Congratulations and keep making more.

ArifRocks responds:

Thanks for the review. The display time of the error message has been changed already. I updated the file several times around 4 hours ago but NG's system won't reflect the changes for some reason. Also the medals seem to be an NG problem - according to other users its happening on other games too.

[The Stick Adventure]

That was pretty fun.
Remember, medals always make a game more fun than it actually is.
Here's your 10/5 , good job and make more.

Jeffyx responds:

Thanks so much bro

[Native Girl]

Nice designs but if you had only made the underclothes removable i would have given you 5

actually responds:

In cse you didnt know Google ads do not like nudity

[Shrinkit 2]

Awesome!
I loved the expressions on Smiley , and the music was relaxing.

NPGames responds:

Thanks, I dig the little guy too

[Journeys of Reemus 4]

Brilliant as always

I loved using remnants of all quests during the ending.
The story was pretty good.
Keep making more.

ClickShake responds:

Thanks. We will. :)

[It ees gravity]

Its depravity!

Just kidding.
Good effort though and keep it coming...

coffingames responds:

Thanks for the kind words :)

[Thoreau]

Lovely concept

Relying on your hearing and everything.
But what is the meaning of this whole game?

3D-xelu responds:

Nightmares... i .. guess

[Clock Hunt]

Nice

Its good

thinking-man responds:

Yes.